Senin, 30 Januari 2012

My Experience When Went to Supermarket

last month i went to the supermarket with my old brother. 
we are buying modem, buying need my brother, after we settle down we are stop by a place to ate.
finally, this holiday is fun and amazing
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1 komentar:

  1. herlina23 Februari 2012 pukul 09.59

    I think this written good
    u just make a little mistaken
    " the last paragraph not coherent with the topic
    the topic is went to supermarket not holiday
    but over all thanks did my assignment

    BalasHapus

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